Of Paolo Conte, an artist for whom I have boundless admiration for a lifetime, I have always admired his ability to synthesize complex, composite, and fragmented situations into just a few, sometimes terse, words... I always remember with extreme, yet subtle pleasure, the definition he gave of Duke Ellington ("Here’s Duke Ellington, a great boxer, all fans and silences...") and I challenge any Bertoncelli or even, I exaggerate, an Arrigo Polillo, to come up with a description of the Duke that is more fitting, concise, and definitive than this one.
I find your daring parallel between your voluptuous beautician and the Art of Fenoglio and Conte lovely...
I understand less your intention to introduce into the review's mechanics a phrase from the guitarist son of Abruzzo; I truly don’t see the connection between the two situations, it seems a bit forced to me.
Nor do I think that the detachment, almost immediately, from what seemed to be the subject (a stunning composition of the Lawyer in the Middle Ages) contributes to the overall flow of your writing, cluttering the review with quotations from his other songs that, in the long run, and this is merely my opinion, distract the reader's attention somewhat. A review that, I should mention, you have specifically titled with the name of the aforementioned sublime composition. Although I then realize that the title more accurately refers to a clip present on the Tube...
PS Conte is right, a true drummer is always in the shadows and watches all the bad knuckles—bandmates and audiences...
Your description of a landscape and a place that only those who know it can archive among the places of the soul is beautiful and sincere, as it is full of Everything and Nothing, of exaggeration and perfect synthesis, of the most candid and genuine popular spirit and the highest and most disdainful nobility that exists... It’s clear that you truly loved the places, beyond the physical and sentimental attraction to Elvira...
@[lector] is right, and for once he deserves it... Start writing again, rethink, polish, and edit; it’s a pleasure to read you.