Voto:
I'm sorry, we're not on the same page. From what I've gathered from your personal profile, you wrote it on the spur of the moment, and a work like this requires much more time than just an hour to be analyzed (it takes weeks to properly analyze a âcanonicalâ novel, think about one thatâs 1300 pages long! I mention this because I have an English Literature exam coming up, otherwise I wouldnât bring it up...). I wouldn't even know where to start critiquing you. Perhaps the most critiquable point is the "good/evil" schema. A couple of years ago, I read something very interesting about this on a website (if I find the link, Iâll add it later). If you pay attention, not everyone is purely good (a phrase to be taken with a grain of salt): Gandalf doesnât want to keep the Ring because heâs afraid that it could subjugate him, that he might be TEMPTED (and temptation is not "good"); Frodo, while holding onto the Ring for too long, becomes corrupted in a certain sense; his ability to perceive reality gets distorted (okay, it's because of the Ring); Saruman wasnât actually bad at first (if you read something else related to Tolkien that mentions the Istariâthe "Wizards" who came from Valinorâyou'll realize that Saruman was their leader, the brightest. But he succumbed to temptation and, using the color symbolism in LotR, went from pure and innocent White to becoming Multicolored, breaking down the White (innocence) to HAVE MORE (greed). Itâs no coincidence that Gandalf will later become "The White," taking Saruman's place); Gollum was just a simple Hobbit, one of the most peaceful creatures in Middle-earth: even here, greed corrupted him in spirit and flesh, yet he plays a key role in resolving the story; without him, the Ring wouldnât have been destroyed (or at least, letâs assume so). As Gandalf says to Frodo in the Mines of Moria, what right did Bilbo have to kill Gollum/Smeagol when he had the chance? It wouldnât have been wise, because Gollum still had something to offer for the GOOD. Last examples: Melkor/Morgoth and Sauron. Melkor was a Valar, one of the most powerful "deities" created by Iluvatar. Initially, he wasnât evil; over time, greed (that same greed, read The Silmarillion and the tale of the Silmarils regarding this) caused him to "fall into evil"; the same goes for Sauron (a Maia), his most faithful servant. Regarding the uselessness of writings in "invented languages" (I get chills from the word "useless"...), Mr. Ronald was, as you mentioned, a professor of Anglo-Saxon Language and Literature first, English afterward; he was an eminent philologist, and his passion for languages and speech led him, from a young age, to create strange languages. Middle-earth, Valinor, Númenor, and the entire world and cosmogony he created were made PHILOLOGICALLY-LINGUISTICALLY; he created all of it TO SERVE AS A BACKDROP FOR THE LANGUAGES, which have great substance, if not lexically, certainly phonetically, morphologically, and syntactically (he based them on various languages, both Indo-European and Uralic-Finnish). However, I can agree with you that sometimes the storytelling can become boring (there's a point where I always slow down my reading significantly). I find it unacceptable to make such a superficial analysis without the necessary tools, Iâm sorry. Perhaps over time, other considerations will come to mind, for now, Iâm done. I apologize if there are incorrect uses of punctuation; I wrote this all in one go... and especially if I couldnât provide further explanations to counter your points, but I havenât read the book in several years, and I would need to reread it thoroughly, but those are the thoughts that came to mind at the moment. Philological greetings to everyone...